This is a rough guideline for the introduction part, help me to improve it by leaving comments so I can refine it better.
Background information:
-situation discussed:
-the used of computer has become a major part of student's life,whether or not are they using for academic wise or entertainment wise,computer and internet has shaped a digital world in students and it affects students' lifestyle and health.
-the health of MMU tudents has been infected in serious condition as they use the computer day and night for 24 hours without rest.
-a researched about the hours students spent on computer is been done not long ago and it has proved the above saying.
-it also affect students' lifestyle in return.(students faces the computer more than doing other things like sports,etc)
-aim of the report:
*find out the reason that affect students to use computer daily without rest,to research on the advantages and disadvantages of using computer in all aspects.
*find out the health condition and reason why students like to do last minute work.
-terms of reference:
*who asked for the report:Mr Too Wei Keong
*date that the report was asked:(check calendar,not very sure about that)
"this report was requested by Mr Too wei Keong,the Creative Communication Lecturer in MMU on the (date)......"(to be continued)
content and scope:
-this report will responds to the outcome of the problem discussed and the method of solution for the problem,it will also discusses about the current situation of the students' health condition...
have a look at this and do leave a comment so I'll know my mistakes.
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about one of the aims which you stated 'reason why students like to do last minute work',i'm not sure whether it is related to the topic. Just my thinking^^
ReplyDeletehmm, what comes to my mind is that doing last minute work and put entertainment as priority may affects the lifestyle,and so it may cause students to practice unhealthy lifestyle in return.they may be playing computer games most of the time and do last minute work,or watching movies,etc and not doing assignment instead.This way of practice may affects a student's health as they use computer too much without rest even though they do last minute work.So, we got to find out why they do last minute work to see if the statement is true.This is my thinking.kai wen.
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